The Official Writing Challenge
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12/04/08
Loved your story and the way you tied it in to your message of God's greatest gift. Good writing. Keep it up.
12/05/08
Wonderful! I usually don't care for "lessons" at the end of a story, but in this charming story, the lesson is just the right final touch.
Nice story with a good tie-in. Good job. :)