The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/07
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. One of the loveliest extended metaphors I've read here. Very moving...thank you for this poem.
09/10/07
Beautiful imagery here - I could picture this so clearly. Lovely.
Yes! A standing ovation from my corner of FW! Great job! Loved it.
09/11/07
If you hadn't said the character was female, i would have thought you were talking about me!

Nicely done.
09/11/07
Wonderfully flowing, vivid poetry! Simply beautiful and lovely verse. Your message is brought out in an elegant and striking manner.
So beautiful and flowing. Wonderfully written.