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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Write in the ADVENTURE genre (05/24/07)
I was a missionary in Afican for about two months. There I have seen people being healed,casting out demons, and even people being brought back to life after they were pronounce dead. In most of the villages we were welcome. But then we came to this one village where they feared this witch doctor that had a demon in him. We were told he had great power and that he hated Christians. But we told them we wanted to set up.We had a big tent to set up. And we were showing a movie about the life Of Christ. So they led us to a clearing big enough so all the village could see. As we walk to the clearing we heard drums beating. The witch doctor was trying to get other witch doctors to come and help him stop us. We had this terrible feeling in our stomages as the drums beat louder. As we try to set up our tents we heard the cries of the witch doctor and then the wind pick up. The villagers told us it was the witch doctor that summon the wind. But we kept working. The drums beat louder, and a storm came up and it was thundering and lighting so hard we were scare to continue but we did. The villagers began coming so we try to start the generator after we refilled it. But there standing right in front of us waving a skull in the air was the witch doctor.The generator would not start.And it was brand new. We knew without lights and no movie the villagers would leave. After an hour and a half of pulling the cord to start the generator we were about to give up. So we all held hands and ask Jesus for help. I pull the cord and it started right up. We gave thanks and latter on that night we cast out the demon in the witch doctor. That night a lot of the villagers gave their life to Christ. This is base on a true story that a missionary told our church.
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Joanne Sher 
06/03/07
Wow - what a tale! And to think it is true.
Your story would read easier if you broke it into paragraphs. Thanks for sharing this amazing adventure!
Jan Ackerson
06/04/07
A very exciting adventure!

Please consider an additional edit; there are some misspelled words and missing word endings that detract from your message. When the writing is edited, you'll be more likely to keep readers interested, and this story definitely deserves more readership.