The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/07
I loved this poem!! Delightful takeoff on "Twas the Night Before Christmas"...one to which I could totally relate! I too am a notorious "church sleeper," and my family is forever poking me awake during services and sometimes even teasing me about my snoring.

Very cute and clever. Great job!
A wonderful funny poem. I could hear the "Twas the Night Before Christmas" sound. Great Job.
04/20/07
Really enjoyed it! I laughed out loud, remembering once when my own Gramma fell asleep in church...elbowed me in the ribs for giggling.

Very cute! Excellent take on humor. My husband could sure relate to this. Good poetry.
For some reason I can relate to this... :-)
04/23/07
Well done — and a good lesson to boot!
04/24/07
Good work. Humerous. Visual. Consistent rhythm throughout. Yeggy
04/24/07
I'm still smiling! This is very well written. I like the rhythm and subtle humour. Keep it up.
Great job! I too could hear 'The night before Christmas' and then near the end it was more like Dr. Suess. Wonderful!
04/25/07
Love it! The lady who usually sits behind me tends to snore, and it makes me giggle, every time. (Why isn't it funny when my hubby does it at night?)
04/25/07
Hehehe - ah the every present Head Bobber. (Dad always says he's checking for pin holes lol)
04/25/07
I think this type of writing is the hardest but you made it look easy. Like the others, I could hear the tune in my head, this just flowed. It was funny and relatable. Very well done!
Loved this! Hilarious...^_^