The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/06
I enjoyed this - wasn't sure why, exactly, you made it a conversation with someone - and you lost the quotes part of the way through - but the message is so real! Great description!
If your article is about you, I can see how you would feel that you were called. This pulled at my heart strings particularly when you described thoughts of suicide. It is unfortunate that anyone gets to that mental state. Again, if this is about you, God has something wonderful in mind for you. Keep the faith and keep writing.
11/20/06
Interesting slant: that we can drown in different ways, physical and mental. Both can be just as devastating. Keep writing.