The Official Writing Challenge
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Marvelous acrostic, and beautiful title. I loved this.
I love acrostics, and this was a good one. I had to look up the verse because I wasn't familiar with it. Perhaps you should have written it out at the end, so you wouldn't leave your reader guessing. Thanks for putting the reference in, though.
Very clever the way you used the acrostic for each stanza. It enhanced rather than took away from the feelings you expressed in your poem. Well done.
Beautiful, inspirational!!
I loved this! Great job of a creative poem. This ministered to me.
This was absolutely beautiful, sweet, well-written and captured so perfectly the difference between life with God or without Him.

So many phrases were my favorites, it's hard to pick just one or two, so I'll simply say - WONDERFUL!
I'm no poet but I do love to read a great poem. Well done.
This is really good. Very unique.