The Official Writing Challenge
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Oooh, I like this; it reads like the best of Isaac Asimov, only with spirit! Very good!
I really liked this! I was immediately interested and wanted the story to keep going.
Wow--you grabbed my attention and hung on like a pit bull! Wonderfully creative, well-built, well-paced, dynamic ending. Your style rocks, too! Awesome message--you did fairly and more to move yourself up.
Yes, I agree. A quick read. I couldn't take my eyes off of my monitor. Way to go.

Whoa, this is the kind of story that you want to share with others. I want to buy the book. Good job.
This is very well written narrative. Creative and reader friendly. Well done.
Wow! I read this after seeing Dub's top 9. Thanks, to you and Dub.