The Official Writing Challenge
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From the heart, your piece does a good job of showing the contrast of life before and after Jesus and how he can brings abundance into one's life. I would like to have had a little more detail on the "after" side, but perhaps that pesky word limit confined you. Good writing with an raw honesty that touches the reader.
Powerful testimony. Probably, the word limit caused you to clip some of the story, and a couple of sentences needed help. But, all in all, this is one that should be read to a senior high youth group.