The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/05
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Its well-written and kept my interest from start to finsh. Great title too. Keep up the great work!
One could have disliked this man who felt business was everything, but I didn't because somewhere in there you sneaked in his humaness. One could feel he had been torn for a long time. Made me think of a side story, one where God uses the crisis for just this person; that he is that important to God. See, what you did! you got me to thinking!
03/07/05
Very nicely done Larry. You packed it all together nicely.