The Official Writing Challenge
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The second paragraph was the best; telling about the beautiful things we see, and I liked the "idea" that perhaps God created Man so that He could share this beauty with others. However, the rest was a sermonette - which, for me was not exactly my cup of tea. Repetitious, as I am aware of what a Christian's purpose in life is - but for those who are not of the Christian did make some very good points...and nicely done.
Some great details and descriptions, but you lose that as you go into the study portiong. It's a very good study, and with a longer word count, you can bring more great images into the last part :)