The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
Your last stanza is such a blessing! Perfect in every way.
Gulp! This brought tears to my eyes! You certainly ARE a blessing...an angel (messenger from God) patrolling the internet!! I loved this. :-)
05/23/06
Yes, it is a special gift you have. May God continue to use your heart, your love and your words to bless the reader and all those He brings your way.
Oh, dear poet, you are such a special blessing in so many ways!! This poem is beautiful. The approach to prosperity is unique and positive, so appealing. This is a very creative and lovely, lyrical poem. Thank you for writing this gem!!
05/24/06
Yeah, this is very good. The prose set up to the poem, then the strong heartfelt verses made it all come together. Nice work.