The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the poetic word usage and expression in this piece. I wanted to quote a couple of examples, but the more I read, the more wonderful examples I found. Please put this in your portfolio and submit it for a Christian publication. You may need to tighten a few places here and there. The more I read, the more I was drawn into this beautiful and poignant piece. Good job!
Great teaching! The analogy of the gold worked really well. The issue of balance is so important, but not always easily mastered. Great writing!
I was expecting something different from the title! So I was suprised in a good way, to see the different small stories here woven together for one great thought. enjoyed
This is a lesson we all have to learn. And I certainly learned my share. If young people would take charge of their own finances early in life(that is, if we parents forced them to) Then a big part of it would be easier.Greatttt story and lesson!