The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved it! Beautiful and so well written! I had to go back and read it again and again! What can I say? Fantastic Job of explaining Escape! Kudos!
Well done.. The poem flowed. I don't usually comment on poems. Nice Job.
Beautiful poem!!
Very strong work, and one that can be re-read. God bless.
Oh, I like the parallels in this poem: the soul that is driven, weary, wounded, tormented, thirsty, and finally grateful and the way you used the word 'escape' to pull it all together.
A nice progression from being driven to being grateful.
I agree, this one needs to be read and reread often.
Which condition is my soul in? Excellent!
I knew it, I knew it, I knew it! Smart Judges! And Congratulations - well deserved!