The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this poem. Wonderful
I'm so very glad God is always on the scene.
Thank you.
12/06/05
I admit, I had to read it twice for the message to sink in; then suddenly I saw it...the remorse, hopelessness, repentance, forgiving grace, hope and then life refreshed...each verse making the Reader see each plateau clearly.
Nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
"a voice as new as it is old./ Refreshed and whole, I dance!" absolutely beautiful lines! Lovely poem!
12/07/05
I really like the unique rhyme scheme and meter of this poem. Beautifully done, and with a great message of hope.