The Official Writing Challenge
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This is the second story I'm the first to comment on. A great piece, fun to read, and great descriptions.
I'm glad you conquered your fears, and hope you can press that on to the spiritual world.

God bless,

I've never skied - never saw snow until I was in my twenties so this piece really struck a chord with me. Loved your 'voice' that was friendly and conversational and put the reader immediately at ease (we knew we weren't going to get 'preached' at). Yet I suspect there's also a message hidden in there as well. Good writing. Keep it up!
I remember that kind of fear the first time I went rafting. (LOL) Enjoyable reading your friendly story. God bless ya, littlelight
What a loving husband (I'm just thankful my hubby wouldn't take me out there in the first place. I'd need a "snail trail" lol)
Written with wit and charm. Break up the long second paragraph for greater readability. Lots of fun to read this!