The Official Writing Challenge
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Truly a lovely story; but I would be amiss if I failed to be honest. You need to edit it more carefully...check spelling and typing. A very touching story.
I agree with both the previous commenters. This is wonderfully written and heart-stirring, and would be even more so if edited carefully. I was very moved.
Thank you for touching my heart with your story. Edit it to perfection.
I agree, with editing this would be a great story. It is very powerful and shows true love.
I think you must be describing the effect of Alzheimers, or something like it. Polish up the editing and sumit this as an article; this is powerful, emotional and touching and there will many who can relate to it. Beautiful work. God bless.
That is truly something to hold on to. Very touching, and powerful story, that reaches out to many of us. God bless you, littlelight