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Beautiful job with the topic and encouraging others in their travels through life. The future for graduates is oft times stressful and filled with uncertainty...but with God, ease comfort and confidence boom.

Nicely done. Thank you for this, I am sure many will appreciate your words.

God BLess~
This has so many poignant lines in it. I could so relate as my baby is almost done with her senior year of HS and my son is graduating from college and going to Seminary. My oldest is getting married so I could relate to this. I smiled at the lines straight ahead, as I have told my children the future is wide open before them.

I'm not great with poems, though I do enjoy writing them. These are just some of my thoughts, you had a lot of dashes that halted the flow for me. You may want to double space and break it down to verses so it's not overwhelming to the reader.

It was spot on topic. I do believe this is the first graduation story I've read. I enjoy fresh takes on the topic. You also give some delightful advice here.
Congratulations for ranking 8th in level two!