The Official Writing Challenge
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Just love the grandma stories. Good job on this one. God bless!
Touching story about care giving that can be time consuming, but so worth it in the end. Thanks for sharing and blessings.
being a carer is certainly time consuming and a good one for the theme. You describe the elderly people well but i did not get the flavor of Jake in the same way. I wondered how old he was and what he looked like and so would have loved to have a little more description of him.
I so enjoyed your story. It was heart warming and so touching. Good job and keep writing.
I really liked the dialogue between the two characters. The line about hearing more than she meant to tell was especially good.