The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked how you showed people and their emotions as the taste of our tongues.

Just watch your punctuation, numbers like twenty-four should have a hyphen. In a sentence if you split it into two different thoughts use a semi-colon instead of a comma. These seem like simple things, but they can make your article easier to read.

You did a great job of making the topic your own and using creativity to get your point across.
Congratulations for placing in the top 8 of your level.