The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story of responsibility. It was nice to see the essay in the end choke up the father. I'm sure it was something he'd cherish for a very long time.

Even the words on the stamp paid in full are so powerful. How lucky we are that Jesus stamped paid in full on our receipt as well.
This bought tears to my eyes. You did a fantastic job and your story was inspirational. Thank you for sharing and keep writing.
Very solid story . On topic. Interesting. Believable. good message for the ages. Held my interest and made me think.
Good job!

Very well-written. I could just see all of this happening and the ending was perfect!
Well written. Great Message.
Congratulations on your win!