The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice ending! Laughter is certainly a God-given getaway. Thanks for sharing!
We all need those Calgon moments, don't we, even if is only in our minds. Good writing!
Amazing how life is! So true.
Good imagery, break dialog and thoughts out to avoid confusion, a little structure and this is a good one.
Laughter is indeed medicinal! Enjoyed the reminder that the mind is the control panel of our lives - 'let this mind be in you which was in Christ Jesus.' Seemed there were some rough technical things that could be smoothed out, but the content is great. I liked this!
Amen to laughter! Good point!
This was funny. I think that the comments of the others re. spacing etc. would all be resolved if you preview your work, sentence by sentence, before you submit it.
Love the idea of laughter being the best retreat.
Thank you for sharing this memory. I love the humorous way in which you approached the topic. The ending was a surprise and so true. Best wishes with this piece.
Loved the laughter retreat!