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I Loved This! What an original idea. It was very amusing and refreshing! "Wonderful"
Fantastic approach! One has to wonder about how the guards would have reacted to such event! Loved the dialogue!
The dialogue was perfectly written. I could hear and feel the desperation in the guards' voices. The ending was so good. "I'm going to find JESUS!" Wow, beautifully done.
Ok - this has got to be the winner - I think I know who wrote this! ;)
Excellent dialogue. One can feel the tension between the characters and the power behind the resurrection. He's going to find Jesus. Great.
I enjoyed reading the account from the soldiers view. I loved the "Hot spit" ! that was funny!
Yeah, this is a "what if" story, interesting dialog. Thank you.
Wonderful story and interesting approach! Loved it! Thank you!
I liked the way you used only dialogue. It kept reading. Interesting viewpoint of the events surrounding the death and resurrection of Jesus.
Excellent article! Multidimensional. We were in the moment with you.
Not many use the guards view. Very unique. I enjoyed this piece. Next time give a unique title to your unique piece.
Great job, Kathy! Looking through the guard's eyes at the most awesome sight in creation -- what a joy! I loved the touch of earthy humor and the guards' realistic compulsion to locate our living Lord.