The Official Writing Challenge
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Scary prospect. Your writing so true to topic.
A chilling little glimpse into a possible future. Good job with the atmosphere of this story.

Take a look at this sentence:

Taking Stephen’s advice, the door finally gave way. It's written as if the door took Stephen's advice. Be careful of those misplaced modifiers!

I like the quiet moodiness here.

Excellent sense of place and atmosphere with this piece. Very haunting - you kept me on the edge of my seat, wondering where this was going. Very nicely done.
A sad look at a future that might be ours. "It Is Written"...and this was an insight into what may come. Nicely done and well written.
You paint this somber scene beautifully. I felt like I was walking the halls with them.
Sadly, many churches already water down the Gospel, portraying Christ as one of many ways to reach God.
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. This was a very creative take on the topic. Nice job.