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Topic: Illustrate the meaning of "Make Hay While the Sun Shines" (without using the actual phrase or literal example). (03/06/08)
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TITLE: Fullness of the Blessing | Previous Challenge Entry
By c clemons
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
Seize the moment
Make it work for you
Cause,
This train might be awhile
Before it returns down the track
Which car belongs to you?
That might be the question
As always He has the answers
Put action behind the words
Call Him to remembrance
Let Him show He cares
Jump in with both feet
No fence straddling for you
Everyone knows you are
The Blessed
But act like it if you dare
You saw the year of release, *
With the number seven
You even spoke about heaven
But now you have new authority
In this year of expectation
Yes, it’s two thousand eight
New beginnings, new dates
How wonderful to know
His Fullness He will show
The Fullness of the Blessing
In your life,
To the rim to the overflow
Be what He has called us
His children, the blessed
Those who believe and receive
You’ve got your ticket
So don’t get left
Or allow the sun to set
On your passion your dream
It could be your season
Your opportunity, so don’t delay
Get on board now,
And seize the day!
* Duet. 15:1
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Take a look at how many common expressions you have used in this poem. Is there a way that you could say the same thing, only with fresh ideas and images?
I like your title--it matches the mood of your poem perfectly.