The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting take on the topic -- I like it. Your writing is very good.
Really good, quite creative, and great imagery in this story.

In the last paragraph, I thought the transition from embarassment and humiliation to celebration was quite abrupt--it threw me, a bit.

Other than that little moment, this was very enjoyable! Loved it.
Very creative, very well written and right on target, topic-wise! Wow! Great job...and an enjoyable read from beginning to end! Kudos!
Lovely and creative.

I was very curious about the character's names. Do they mean something? I was hoping there was a reason for the "odd" names you gave them. I'm off to google those two words!

Wonderfully done.
I liked you story. thank you for sharing. Well done.
As I was reading I couldn't help but think about the Church, as the bride of Christ, waiting for her bridegroom! May we keep ourselves ready, as we wait, and not get impatient, pick up our righteousness--which is as filthy rags...Excellent story