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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: birthday (05/23/05)
God have brought me this far, and He brought me through so much.
He have been using me to reach those, who want to feel his touch.
I can't take any of the credit, for the
purpose he planned for me.
I have learned through my faults, for He
made me see.
As my heart see the pain, of those who want to be free.
The Lord make that Divine Appointment,
while he is preparing me.
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Debra Bowers
06/01/05
I'm sorry sweetie, I just din't get what you were going for. Maybe a little longer and in poem form? "God Bless"
dub W
06/04/05
Somewhat off topic, but worthy of mention, I think this can be shaped into a devotion.
Deborah Porter 
06/07/05
Robert, I did pick up the connection that this was a reflection on how far the Lord has brought you after another year. But unfortunately the problem with your little poem was the fact that it was "little" - too small for the Challenge.

There is a word count rule that all entries must be within 150 to 750 words. Your poem came in at just 76 words, so was way too far under the word count minimum limit.

I hope you will enter again though in the future. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)