The Official Writing Challenge
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Captivating. Good stuff!
Powefully well-written and "bittersweet". I truly enjoyed it.
I liked the use of timeline to tell this bittersweet story. Good work.
Great work! How bittersweet.
Joyce, I truly enjoyed the story especially the ending. All the while I thought it was a true story -or was it?
Hi Joyce. Just popping in very quickly to let you know that you were in the semi-finals for the Valentine Challenge and did very well! So give yourself a pat on the back - you deserve it. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Thank all you for your great comments. This was my first try at a fiction story. To get so many wonderful comments and to find out I was in the semi-finals was much more than I expected. Thank you all so much.
A truly lovely piece. I could feel the gentle fall breeze, quickening their hearts and drying unified tears. Your pen never fails to carve out such gentle stories. Well done!!