The Official Writing Challenge
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This story was a fun read - very fast-paced. Had a bit of trouble following the dialog, but that could have been me. Love the dialog.
Loved the rustic flavor of this, and the dialect was great. I felt a bit lost in the beginning--needed something to establish a time frame and a setting. An edit for clarification, and this one's good to go.
Sweet, a lil' work, (I mean little)and this one is a winner? :)
This sounds familiar -- was this a continuation of another challenge perhaps? or am I totally wrong, which is possible! Great job. Loved the story.
This made me laugh. I like the rambling and super-quick dialouge, Olive and Dean are some neat characters. Try to give a few more breaks next time or pauses so the reader doesn't get lost in the in between-apart from that. this was so much fun to read! ^_^
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