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Very catchy title, almost like a headline you would have read in Baylon's "The Daily Babble." :)
Great story, and powerful messages.
A couple of minor syntax errors, but I'm not in the position to complain about that. :|
Well done.
The title alone could be a #1 Hit. This Bible Story is perfect for the topic "anger".
But then I love Bible stories, you can't go wrong with subject matter - and this was done up very nicely. Good dialogue, and I enjoyed the retelling of made it a delightful rread. Kudos!
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This is a really cool retelling of the Bible story. I love the modern voices and the interaction of the characters. Very good.:)
I love it and oh that title. I love retelling Bible stories. Well done.