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This seems to be a cry for help. But, also, an encouragement for other teens to beware.
This is interesting, very poetic. I became a mother at 19 oddly enough I wasn't scared like alot of teen mothers are I think that my stupidity had glazed over my vision that much! I eventually came back to God and he sent me my husband who is a much better man then the man I was trying to force my 'happily ever after' on. It's all about patience and learning. Wisdom as you so eloquently illustrated.
Very blunt. Gave me much to think about.
Very powerful. The pain is almost palpable. My heart goes out to someone walking this lonely path. But God will indeed keep you. Keep the faith and stay strong.
An interesting take on what often happens to young teen-age girls. I like the brevity of this piece -- no unneeded words. To the point.
What a difficult situaton to be in. The emotions expressed here feel so raw and real! Nice. Keep writing.
A real reality check.
Wow, deep.