The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/06
Good points, and it sounds like you are blessed with a wonderful pastor.

From a writing standpoint--take a look at your sentence structure. Over half of your sentences begin with the same two words ("A pastor..."). Sentence variety gives an essay more interest.

I look forward to reading more from you--your writing skills are very evident.
12/13/06
Yes indeed! There certainly IS a difference between a pastor and a preacher. You spelled out a Pastor to a "T". Nice job.