The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/06
I love the tenderness of this character study, and the wonderful epitaph.
10/23/06
I was sorry that Officer Jake couldn't enjoy his retirement and do those things he always wanted to do. However, you gave his character such warmth and humane qualities that we understand how much his community would miss him.
10/29/06
So many unsung heroes... Thanks for taking the time to alert us to this one. You have created a warm and realistic policeman - we could do with more of them. Informative story that flowed well. Yeggy