The Official Writing Challenge
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Fun! I doubt Walter would really play Lilibeth's little game, since her father had already sold her to him, but I enjoyed reading it anyway. You were solidly on topic and your writing is great.
03/15/05
What an imaginative story!
True the story was fun to read! But I did wonder why he had to prove something since her father had gambled her away? I think that could be rewritten to take that into account, maybe a "if" into the gambling debt was included. See you have me thinking of all kinds of add ons!
03/19/05
Very interesting story and the way Lilbeth got out of her predicament.