The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/06
Good story line, but more dialogue would have been nice. Easy to read, flows well.
05/10/06
Well, that's Minnesota for ya! Tee Hee! Of course, I'm not prejudiced at all, but I think you did a great job showing us love in action through your story. Welcome to Minnesota, too!