The Official Writing Challenge
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08/13/16
I love this piece and its tie into the restoration God applies to our souls. Great job! Colorful descriptive writing...I think you should move on from beginner to advanced here on out...
08/14/16
You wove a powerful message into the threads of your story. It is a delightful read with a great message. I think you will do very well in the challenge.
A very charming story. It would be nice if it was a real life story.

Very well written. It progressed smoothly and had enough describing of things to bring out added interest.

Nice going.
08/19/16
Congratulations on your highly commendable rating.