The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/15
WOnderful words that fully cover the topic in a powerful way. Good job!
God bless~
You make some great points like many others have done this week. It shows that many people are troubled about the state of our country today. The main red ink I have is the number of times you used some variant of the word stand. I think you'll be surprised if you go back and count them. Don't be afraid to write about the topic without using the topic words. Check out some of the stories in Masters to see how they do it. You have a wonderful passion that can clearly be seen in your words. You did a fine job with this piece.
Very challenging, much needed to be said and heard.

Well written.

Political correctness is eroding the truths contained in the Bible.