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Topic: Pros and Cons (08/14/14)
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TITLE: Friends of the world:Upsides and Downsides | Previous Challenge Entry
By Caleb Cheong
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about the enmity with the world
Consider both the pros and cons
Don’t choose their ways
Dispensers of God’s grace
It gives immense joy, helping friends
escape the wiles and join the Wise
Be winners of soul
We tell friends His Good News
“Go into the world and declare
the gospel to them” Jesus said
The sinners’ friend
We show the light of life
A blameless life we strive to live
above reproach in this dark world
Let your light shine
We are exposed and tempted
by worldly pleasures and ideas
Can we quench all the fiery darts?
Abide in Christ
They may lead us astray
Their own pursuits conflict with us--
to be crucified to the world
Don’t be Lot’s wife
And soon, we may partake
in their rebellion to God’s rule-
the god of this world blinds their minds
Walk in the light
Such friendships shipwreck faith
Some people we ought to avoid
Bad company can ruin good morals
God’s enemies
To have friends of the world
should not condone or encourage
sins but help us show Jesus’ light
He’s the true light
Dear Lord, Help us discern
Your Spirit’s leading as we win
friends, neighbors, co-workers- we pray
in Jesus’ name
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I found it a bit hard to read because the rhythm seemed off. Sometimes an author can hear his own rhythm because he forces it. It helps to have someone else read it out loud. Mark where they stumble, and try to smooth out that word or phrase.
The theme was thought-provoking. Keep writing.
I missed the periods.
We do have to be careful of the friends we choose as well as the ways of the world.
The Holy Spirit may not be leading us to be a teacher of the gospel but a humble helper to some needy person. Let the Spirit lead so we find the place he has for us.
Poetry doesn't always have to have rhyming words so I was not to concerned about the lack of them.
Your thoughts came through clearly.