The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a nice story. I could picture the MC in the kitchen with Mom.

(red ink when using Mom as a name when you don't have a,the, or my in front of it, it should be capitalized)

I enjoyed your message too. God can do great things with difficult situations if we just allow him to.
Wow! What a profound message. Thank you for sharing this perfectly crafted story.
06/12/11
I like your perspective with Mom's faith passed down to her son. Good ending too. Thanks for sharing.
06/13/11
Great story, great writing, great message. I loved it. God bless!
06/13/11
I really love your mom. This story has a real down home feeling to it.

In paragraph five, I think you meant to use the word I before, am one of.