The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/10
I enjoyed this, I liked the way child enjoyed hearing the stories of the father. One word left out, rest very well written. Thanks, Keep WRiting.
09/04/10
I enjoyed your sweet story. The thoughts expressed in the last para. were especially good. Very well written.
Thanks for sharing your memories. This was enjoyable to read.
You really tugged at my heart. As a whole, we don't say thank you enough to our brave veterans. This story will remind me.
09/07/10
Last sentence should say you're instead of your, I think, but other than that, this is beautiful and touching. It does indeed show feeling and much love.