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By Maria Egilsson
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I'd love to see it formatted more like a typical poem.
Looking forward to reading more from you in future challenges!
Awesome :-)
Really, this poem was a delight to read. You have a good grasp of how to use your words. You will do well writing for these challenges.
Mona
To break my lines
In poems so true
Comments kind I read
And to them I give heed.
So my thanks I give to you
I will learn when this is through.
I appreciate the time
you have taken with my rhyme.
They say that repetition is good for the soul. That's the only reason that I reiterated on the format.
You are very talented!