The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/09
I love the rain, and could hear the sweet sounds of the weather, right along with your MC. :)

I admit I got just a little lost. While there were great words used, I failed to link the ultimate point with the scenes.

I liked seeing the relationship between the two women, and found myself hoping that your MC would continue towards the Ultimate Goal.

Good job on entering this piece.