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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Bitter and Sweet (05/28/09)
The foods I hate are on my bitter list. The foods I like are on my sweet list.

To me coffee is bitter and milk is sweet.

Tea is bitter to me, but grape juice is sweet.

To me peas are bitter, but corn is sweet.

I don't like beans to me their bitter, radishes may not be bitter but their sweet to me.

Carmel Corn is a sweet but to me it is bitter. Pop Corn (not a sweet) is a sweet to me.

Apple Jacks is a sweet I never liked, but oatmeal warmed my stomach and was a sweet to me.

I find that Sauerkraut is bitter, Polish sausage is neither bitter nor sweet, but it is a sweet to me.

I can tolerate Chocolate frosting (it is not bitter), but white frosting is sweet to me.

Chili to me is bitter to me, but Honey Glazed Chicken is a sweet.

I am not picky I will eat most anything unless it is bitter. If it is sweet, I cannot stop myself from having it.
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Jeanne E Webster
06/07/09
An interesting food list, with items that you enjoy being sweet and ones that you do not like are bitter. Is this your way of saying one food is bad and good? It appears that, though you write otherwise, you are a picky eater. Time will probably change your likes and dislikes; it usually does!

This article might make a cute, whimsical poem.
Sara Harricharan
06/08/09
How fun and creative! I know my list of foods is very, um, extensive. LOL! What a fun way to approach the topic. I like it. I especially liked the line with the caramel corn!
diana kay
06/10/09
I was just thinking this would make a great poem and I see that someone has already suggstd that idea. why not try it? you could have the first verse sweet things are.... and the next about bitter add in a few more and see if you can pair them up to rhyme. Good idea but doesnt read so well as a list as there is too much repitition. In a poem repitionion can work very effectively