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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Beginning and End (04/16/09)
Funny how life has it's ups and it's downs
The highs and the lows
Turning you every which way you could possibly go.
The road may be bumpy, there's a few hurdles too
Loops to jump through, leave you unsure about what you should do.
And the job that you have and you trying to keep
Not to mention the pile of bills that's making you lose sleep.
The kids never seem to have what they need
Always something on the list that they need.
It seems as though everything around you is crumbling down
And you're just trying to keep both feet planted firmly on the ground.
Feels like there's no one out there who truely do cares
But what we need is to come together in prayer.
The LORD never said the road won't be rough
Keep your mind set on Him, for He is always enough.
He is the beginning, the middle and He's there to the end
He always have your back, so don't ever give in
He's your strenght, He's your rod and He is your shield
All your sorrow and pain the LORD will heal.
No matter what road you have currently chose
Let GOD lead your steps, trust in Him for he knows.
For the battle is not yours, so don't go it alone.
For you have a mighty King and He sits high on the throne.
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Joanney Uthe 
04/25/09
Great reminder that He is our Beginning and our End.

This would be easier to read if there were stanza breaks. I know when I was in Beginners, I needed help formating my entries. Feel free to ask on the Boards if you have questions.

I read this a few times just to soak in the wonderful message. Great job.
Loren T. Lowery
04/27/09
A good devotional with a great message. You used very few words, but the ones you chose conveyed a sincere truth. I think some spacing between your ideas would have helped the reader and not made the piece seemed rushed in its telling. Good job.