The Official Writing Challenge
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How cute. I love the justice in that. God will be heard. Who can stop the heart of a child? Jesus is here as long as we are, no matter how they try to hide him. I love your story, real or not. Thanks for the reminder. God Bless You and Merry Christmas.
12/17/08
I enjoyed the conversations and how you portrayed the tragedy through the family's interactions. A nation built upon God's Word abandons it in favour of political correctness. Lovely to see the children praising God in spite of that.
12/17/08
Cool story, and I LOVED your last line.
I enjoyed your story all the way through. Well done.
Great message, written very well. :)
GREAT story!! I cringed when I heard "Ebay". YIKES! A note of help - be sure only one person's dialog is in each paragraph. It makes it much easier to tell who is speaking. That said, I LOVE this story, I love Ruthie, and I love that God still has a voice in His children. Some excellent phrases and word choices. Fabulous job!
12/19/08
You've packed a lot into this short story! Well done.