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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: The Family Pet (05/15/08)
I have a couple of pets. One is a rabbit, and the other one is a budgie bird. My budgie, Stephanie likes to stand on top of our bird clock. She flies in different places down in the basement, and the living room. She flies to the laundry room, and the rec room. When she flies upstairs she sits on the curtain panel or one of the picture frames on the wall, and chirps.
We keep our pets in the basement except for when they need to get excercise.
Stephanie likes to nibble on paper, fingers, and curtain panels. She chirps whne the music is on or when the water is running from the tap.
Stephanie quawks when she hears us aguing. I think that she is trying to tell us in her own language to stop fighting.
Our pet rabbit Gracie is a sweet thing. Whenever we go downstairs near her cage, she jumps up to see us. She likes to be petted. Sometimes she stretches out like ag dag, and yawns. When we put Gracie in the dining room, she sits like dog in the middle of the rug.
Other times we take Gracie outside as long as she is supervised by one of us or she will run away. One time it took us a few hours to find her. We went in the back of the complex where we lived, and we found her on someone's property near the garden. As soon as Gracie saw me, I got excited, and tthe she hopped back into our yard. It seems as if she knew that she was in trouble for taking off. we were gals that she was safe.

These animals are delightful creatures in God's sight, and they are also precious. We must take the time to be with our family pets, and give them attention just like parents would give attention to their children.
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Judy Bowers
05/22/08
Yes, God loves birds and rabbits, too.

Watch out for spelling errors and more paragraphs make a story easier for the reader.

Thanks for sharing about your pets.
Yvonne Blake 
05/23/08
I can see that you really enjoy your bird and rabbit.
It would make your writing better if you can find another Beginner buddy to help you proof for spelling and grammar errors.
Well done.
Beckie Stewart
05/27/08
They sound like nice pets to own and glad you enjoy them.