The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/07
VERY interesting writing style! I really liked reading this unique and lyrical entry.

One tiny slip-up in tense usage in the 2nd paragraph...nothing to worry about; this entry is awesome.
12/02/07
I just love this - your voice and word choice and poem and EVERYTHING just delighted me. Excellent, in my humble opinion.
12/03/07
Unique, wonderful writing. Lovely word pictures through the whole entry. Very nice!