The Official Writing Challenge
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Sweet story. God always comes through. Good point.
03/07/07
All the right ingredients - humor, honesty with a touch of vulnerability, a good daddy/daughter relationship, and well told. Very enjoyable!
I really love this story, and the timely lesson learned. You inclluded some wonderful elements, including a sprinkling of humor. Be careful of switching tenses. I look forward to reading more of your work.
03/08/07
You're a good story teller, case in point. Have someone proof your work to catch tense shifts and other minor errors. I read this with a smile.