The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/06
Very strong message here - it was refreshing to see it from the recipient's view and not the person volunteering. My thoughts would be to make it longer adding more detail - you have a situation here that you could share some snippets from and some dialogue and action showing how the people helped. Details always help make a general story more interesting!:) Otherwise - good writing!
Interesting title. Your message and story was very touching and clear. Great job.