The Official Writing Challenge
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Short and sweet. Your title drew me in and I loved the last two lines. Great job!
10/13/06
Great alliteration in the second line, and some other good phrases througout. The second person reference in the final rhyming couplet sort of breaks the stride of the rest of the poem. I like the way you don't pull any punches here...good job.
10/14/06
This was a nice little poem with a powerful message. I liked it alot!