The Official Writing Challenge
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The title made me curious. The story made me wish I had written it. The end made me cry. Hope you place!
09/16/06
Your story was so touching! It grabbed my attention from the beginning and made me have to keep reading. I really liked how you tied together the beginning and end with the driving directions. I'm going to go read it again!
09/17/06
What an amazing story! I love your voice in this, the wonderful, wonderful tale, and the ending. Wonderful!!
This was beautiful writing. The title caught my eye, and the opening paragraph. It came across as "bittersweet"
Good job!